Gotta say. Pretty solid for a first run. The art is cute in a novice way, but also really pretty too. The music is just stellar even if it's just a simple track too and Sam n MC have a fun dynamic with solid dialogue. Most of it was pretty natural though it did come off a little forced in some minor areas. Either way this was great!
Thank you for the feedback and for checking my game out! The forced dialogue probably was due to the fact that I was writing parts of the game the day before it was due so I will definitely work on that more. I'm glad it gave you a great experience. A quick question though, have you come across the 'nightmare run' on your playthroughs?
Nope. I had two runs and they both ended pretty normal. Though, I want to check out this 'nightmare run' now. Nevertheless, I hope you had fun making this, because I think you make good visual novels. It'd be a shame to not see more from ya in this genre.
Have fun working on tweaks and improvements. You've made a new fan, so I'm looking forward to your projects.
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Gotta say. Pretty solid for a first run. The art is cute in a novice way, but also really pretty too. The music is just stellar even if it's just a simple track too and Sam n MC have a fun dynamic with solid dialogue. Most of it was pretty natural though it did come off a little forced in some minor areas. Either way this was great!
Thank you for the feedback and for checking my game out! The forced dialogue probably was due to the fact that I was writing parts of the game the day before it was due so I will definitely work on that more. I'm glad it gave you a great experience. A quick question though, have you come across the 'nightmare run' on your playthroughs?
Nope. I had two runs and they both ended pretty normal. Though, I want to check out this 'nightmare run' now. Nevertheless, I hope you had fun making this, because I think you make good visual novels. It'd be a shame to not see more from ya in this genre.
Have fun working on tweaks and improvements. You've made a new fan, so I'm looking forward to your projects.